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ReplyDeleteI really like your underlined subheadings that are questions. This type of format makes it very easy to know what paragraph is about.
30 million visitors in one year is a lot of people. I wonder how they control the crowds, what parking is like and where visitors purchase food and souvenirs.
After reading your report I was curious to know if there were any Native America ledgends about the falls.
I found a link to this one.
https://m.warpaths2peacepipes.com/native-american-stories/legend-of-niagara-and-great-lakes.htm
Keep up the good work.
Hi Zoe, I really enjoyed learning about the dare devils who have taken on the falls. Nice work. Did you know in Thomasville, Georgia USA there is an Oak tree that claims to be wider than Niagara Falls is tall.
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