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Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, June 12, 2018
writing challenge
As Amy stared up at the enchanting castle she longed for adventure, she longed to turn into something mythical and fly away. She longed to get up to some mischief, she longed to be heroic just once but it would never happen. She was a princess, not a knight. Her father was too precise he had to follow the traditions on Friday the thirteenth. He was always ominous, acting as if his nemesis was going to charge into the castle at any minute. Amy would never get to taste adventure, never.
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