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Wednesday, August 29, 2018

persuasive writing


This is my persuasive writing on why I think that children should have pets, please be aware that this piece is a work in progress, please leave me a comment to tell me how I did.
Thank you. 

1 comment:

  1. You are going to need to be more persuasive than this Zoe xx
    Love Mum

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