Kia ora bloggers! How are you on this fine day? We are looking at kids books, so we each get to create our own. This is my plot:
I: Carmel is a huge snoop who sticks her nose in everyone's business
P: They overhear their parents talking about a present
A: Carmel assumes its for her she asks everyone if they know what her present is/ boasts about it
R: after asking everyone in town she sits down in despair
C: In the end, her parents end up telling her that they are going to her cousin's bday and they show her the present she thought was hers
I will post the entire story with images when I'm finished. Do you have any tips for me? Please give me feedback I really need it :3 Have a fantabulous day.
-Zoe-
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