Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, August 6, 2018
Hybrid animals
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Hello my name is Gianna I go to St Francis of Assisi. You are good at describing things! I can tell by the way you described the Kangacow. The facts that you have used are really good. It is such a shame that they are endangered species. Next time you could try not to repeat facts. What are the coats of the Kangacow used for? And can they only live in Antarctica?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Gianna thank you for commenting on mahi (work) and next time I will try not to repeat facts as for the Kangacow sadly they can not live anywhere else or the will wilt like a flower and die and the eskimos think the make nice rugs again thank you for commenting.
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Hi Zoe, I #love the Kangacow so cute! Next time plz check your spelling. But other than that I l♡ve! Zara.
ReplyDeleteHello Zoe my name is Eilish. I am from St francis of assisi school. I was just reading about your mangacow story. I found it very interesting because I didn't even know they were a thing. I just happen to notice that you put a couple of things twice. Your story brought me back to when I was little and I was imagining mixes of animals. I was wondering why did you choose this topic?
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